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So Volume 3 of Twisted Mirrors (Chapter 15 through 22) has been sent off to Lulu and while I'm waiting for the proof copy to arrive to see if Lulu works out okay as a printer, I decided I get started on a project that's been needing my attention for some time now.

See, when I first started Twisted Mirrors, it was a side project and I never thought it'd be posted anywhere except online. I literally started it just because I wanted something other than FFC to draw. It was posting every other week instead of weekly when I started it too because I was worrying about overwhelming myself. It's kind of funny to think how much it's become the main thing, while FFC has slid more into the role of "pet project". That said, though, it meant I didn't really pay much attention to the quality of the pages at the start. They were web-only, what did it matter?
...well...anyone who's seen the version printed through comixpress knows what it mattered. The already poor-quality drawings are made so much worse by the web-level resolution.

I've been intending to fix this for a while now so that I can get a good quality version printed - for myself mainly. :D The main reason it's taken so long is because I never saved the high-rez scans, so doing these pages in a higher resolution means literally re-scanning and redoing all the text on almost 150 pages. I started this project a while back, so more than half the pages have already been scanned. Now that I've started working on it in earnest it doesn't seem nearly as daunting as it might have. (I just tell myself every time I finish a page - "that's one less I have to do now!" Seems to be working.)

And all this brings me to the main reason I made this post. Since I have to re-type the text for all the pages anyway, I'm taking advantage of the opportunity to fix some problems I had with the earlier stuff. For one, the font on the narration in the beginning is being changed to be more in line with the font I use for narration later in the comic. Much more drastically, I'm actually changing the text on some of the pages to fit in better with the story. For the most part it's staying how I always intended it to be and just worded poorly in the original version, but there's a couple of moments that I've just always found stupid and wanted the opportunity to change.
As bad as it is, the art will not technically change, though my editing skills are better than they were the first time around, so when a page needs editing (if I mess something up in the inking, I note it in the margins to fix it on the computer) it might look a little different, but it's all going to be based on the same inks as redrawing it would take too long and would stick out like a sore thumb in contrast to the older stuff (and I kinda like the fact that I can watch my art evolve as I read through it).

Now the new print version of the book is going to have these changes. There's no questioning that. I think it'll read a lot better to new readers this way, it'll help the world building make more sense and will make the overall story flow a lot better. However, I know people can have a really adverse reaction to this type of ret-con (Star Wars remastered, anyone?) so I wanted to put it to people - should these changes extend to the online version as well? Should I replace the old, original pages on the website with the new versions?

Personally, I'm leaning towards "yes", for all the reasons stated above, I think it just makes the story better, but I do understand the arguments against it. That's the original version that people who do enjoy the story followed, updates might just 'ruin' it. It should be noted that I don't plan to get rid of the old versions entirely. They're saved safely in my archives in their own folder. I believe pretty strongly in keeping all my old mistakes, since I can learn from them too, so this isn't just to purge out my failures. I'm thinking of new readers here!

What do you think? Anyone have any strong opinions on this one way or another? If people are really against it, I'll leave the online archives alone. (I don't expect a lot of thoughts on it either way since I don't have a lot of readers, I just want to avoid any potential backlash, haha!)
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bhudicae Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Go for it, especially since you're leaning that way already! :D And besides, new stuff back in the beginning means we get to reread the whole thing!! :dance:
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dragonsong12 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, I suppose that's true! It's sort of a win-win situation, then!

At the very least, now the dialogue shouldn't make me sqirm as much. ^^;
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Ra-ooo Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's interesting! o:
Would there be any way for you to have like.. two branches in your online archives, one path people can read through that's all the old stuff, and a second path that's the updated stuff? And make the new stuff the primary path for people to read on. I dunno if that's possible.

I'd say go for it though, update everything. Who says pages that are already posted have to be set in stone for eternity, haha If it can be improved, why not?
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dragonsong12 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
...that's a really good idea, actually, and one that I hadn't even considered. I have my own domain, I could just set up a sub page with Wordpress and upload all the old pages directly to it, with a link at the end to where the old and new versions merge again.
I'll have to look into it, but I've been meaning to do that anyway so I could put a backup of FFC under my domain as well. I think that's totally doable!

Thanks! Now all that remains...is actually redoing the pages. :XD:
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Ra-ooo Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay! I'm glad to help, and glad you understood what I was trying to say haha

Good luck man!
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drkfire1 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Student
I agree with your line of thinking.  While I personally loved everything as it was every step of the way, I believe if changes are made the application of said changes would need to be applied to the readily visible product. Those that fall in love with the story (and they will) can then go to the archives and see the process that made such an amazing piece of literature.
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dragonsong12 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the kind words!
I was thinking about including a link to the old pages in the description once I'd updated, but I kind of like Ra-ooo's solution above - to just have an old version available for people to go read if they wish to. That'd solve both problems pretty nicely, I think!

...now all I have to do is actually get to work to redo all those pages. ^^;
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