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Dragons of FFC - Cat Form

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These are the four dragons who have appeared thus far in my webcomic, Firefly Cross: [link]

The dragons of my webcomic are furred and can change forms into various cats in order to hide themselves...but they never get it exactly right.
The grey bobcat-sorta one is Sadryn. His dragon-form looks like this: [link]
The black panther one is Raithlin. Here's his dragon form: [link]
The black house cat is Chaerius, you guy have probably seen him before:[link]
And the tawny leopard in the back is Mirhe. Her dragon form is here: [link]

This image was made for the drunk duck store and has actually been sitting in limbo - inked but not colored - for months. I'd like to draw all their dragon forms too, but I'm not sure how I'd fit them all in an 8X10 image ^^;
It'll hopefully be appearing in the DD store soon, it just may not be immediately.
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My first reaction was "There's 4 dragons in Firecross now?" I'm that behind :D; (I'm on the Chapter 6 title page).

Critique wise, I like the setting of the image, the buildings and the moon, but I feel that you could have pushed the mood a bit more, with some darker shading and brighter highlights. Another thing is the "corner" moon. I can't say for certain but I think those should be avoided (I was told years ago). There's also a possible scaling issue with the furtherest building where Mirhe is featured. Either the building is quite close, or she's quite huge compared to the others. I'm honestly not sure how you could fix that though, it'd be hard to balance building distance while keeping all the cats in focus. Lastly, I think the whole Distopia City feel (if that's what you're still going for in the comic at this point) would have come through a bit sharper if you'd added some more buildings in the distance, even just a block of black with some highlights or glowing windows. Although that all said I know what you're going for and I think you pulled it off well :). Oh and don't mind me I'm trying to practice critiquing now that I'm exposed to so much of it at school.

Also, how much have you made from the DD store?